Please help me please this is urgent I'm having trouble This submission should contain:

1. An original version of one of your body paragraphs with the area(s) you plan to revise highlighted.

2. The revision of that paragraph with the revised area(s) highlighted. Remember that the revision must include your combining two sentences from the original paragraph to create a compound-complex sentence that demonstrates syntax variety and maturity. You should also look for and remove any instance of passive voice. If you did not have any passive voice in your original submission, then just note that in your reflection.

3. A reflection explaining the revisions you made and how they strengthen the paragraph.

my original paragraph
Is there any positive affect playing video games? Of course, physiologists use video games to cure children and adults. How? They use games to help them with different types of disorders such as attention-deficit, hyperactivity, and also with brain injuries. In fact, Games help people with cancer to destroy bad cells and protect them. “Some therapists use games to treat people with brain injuries or learning disabilities. One game allows cancer patients to destroy harmful cells and shield themselves from the effects of chemotherapy."

halloween: it’s my favorite holiday

halloween is one of the best holidays for some people but it can also be scary for others. halloween is a holiday where some people believe spirits and soul of the dead that haven’t moved on will come back again to haunt the lives of the living. this is why many people dress up in costumes to disguise themselves as someone else. some people like us wish to be something that we would benefit in life from. like angels of god. some dress up just to be unique from the others. many families stay home and watch scary movies and others dress in their tremendous costumes and knock on each door to either get a trick or a treat.

personally everybody loves halloween because i could be someone else one day out of the year. it’s fun and entertaining, especially for kids. halloween also has a lot of history. many myths and beliefs say that witches and warlocks are alive and living among us. is this a trick or a truthful treat?

halloween may have secrets and scary things behind the door but we love halloween and it is beautiful to see how happy children are when each door opens full of treats and goodies. it makes everyone happy. happy halloween day.

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pls mark as brainliest.

yh it is right

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yup its an addiction

after i had a fight with my girlfriend, ben advised me to apologise.

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