Revise the passage below so that it maintains a formal style and tone throughout. Passage Most fine arts classes, including visual art, music composition, dance, theater, and creative writing, feature a peer-review component in which students provide feedback on their classmates' work. Some art teachers maintain that peer review is a valuable teaching tool that not only helps student artists reimagine their work but also pushes student critics to develop their taste and technical vocabulary. The thing that's wrong with this is that sometimes people give really lame feedback and don't get how to be nice. When that happens, feelings can be hurt, and the peer-review process can become unproductive.

Read the excerpt from part 3 of the call of the wild. but it was in giving the law and making his mates live up to it, that buck excelled. dave and sol-leks did not mind the change in leadership. it was none of their business. their business was to toil, and toil mightily, in the traces. so long as that were not interfered with, they did not care what happened. billee, the good-natured, could lead for all they cared, so long as he kept order. the rest of the team, however, had grown unruly during the last days of spitz, and their surprise was great now that buck proceeded to lick them into shape. what theme is most supported by the ideas in this excerpt? good leaders are strong and intelligent. loyalty can be a very powerful force. only the strong survive in the wilderness. we are all ruled by our natural instincts.