19 You will revise one body paragraph from your informational article and write a reflection paragraph in
which you explain the revisions you made.
View the grading rubric as you complete your work. This is your guide to a super submission.
1. Choose one body paragraph from your informational article to revise.
2. Copy this paragraph into a new document.
3. Review your paragraph for coherence. Make sure you have a topic sentence and supporting
ideas for this topic.
4. Combine two or more sentences in your paragraph for varied syntax.
5. Review your paragraph for correct English language conventions. Correct any errors.
6. Write a short reflection paragraph on the revisions you made, describing the changes you
made and how these changes improved your writing.
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In one document, submit:
1. the original paragraph
2. the revised paragraph
3. the reflection on the changes you have made
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Supporting fact of Zoo's
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A zoo would be a good place to keep the komodo dragons because they
can't attack anyone and people could see them from a safe area. Also they could
be in a pit where the zookeeper's could throw the food for the dragons for their
safety. No-one could fall into the pit because there would be a little screen to pick
up so that the zookeepers could put the food in there if you were wondering.