Which passage violates all of the rules of concise and precise writing? A. The barely moving train seemed, in my humble and lowly opinion,
as I am not a train expert, to be having some seriously disturbing
trouble with the process of track changing, and the whole train
also needed a really good washing and professionally done paint
job.
B. That train was creeping along the track as it tried to change tracks
successfully
C. The moving train seemed to be having some trouble changing
tracks, and it needed a good paint job.
D. None of the above are correct.

Describe the character of sissy jupe, from hard times, by charles dickens, in four sentences. use anaphora and one metaphor in your description.

What are all of the literally devices in the poem l’envoi by willa cather

Read this passage: byron and mitch are co-captains of the mathletes, their high school's academic team. they are backstage with the five other team members, preparing to compete in the state math quiz. byron sits on the floor with his eyes closed and his earbuds in, listening to classical jazz, which him focus his mind and energy. suddenly, he feels a presence beside him. he opens his eyes to see mitch staring at him. "mathletes! mathletes! " mitch chants loudly. mitch gives byron a thumbs-up and then proceeds to strut around like a peacock, high-fiving the other team members, as byron shuts his eyes again and does his best to refocus his mind which statement best summarizes the passage?