So, I need help with some 6th grade FLVS Language Arts. On 02.06, i made an intro but I suck at writing so I need some help. Just look at l e h screenshot. If you have any pointers for helping me write the rest of the essay, just comment them. Please help me!!

I feel there are some run on sentence that can just be solved with a few commas and under line the title of the book and ad quotations to it too.

you can change by someone having a negative opinon of you in many ways for example thi can lead to depression and taking of ones life also known as sucide this effects there self esteem and ego in a negative way making them feel sad depressed and stressed causing them to act gloomy and sad if this continuses this can lead to self harm or much worse things.

hope i .

kenny´s more than 25 years of relevant public service. in the army for two decades, as official representative for four years, and now for the department of state, as ambassador. this career clearly demonstrates great capacities in the public sector.