DON'T ANSWER THIS IS FOR SOMEONE ELSE Can someone proofread my personal narrative for 100 points? The prompt is:
Write a personal narrative about a hero in your life. The story should tell about an experience that shows why this person is a hero to you and what effect this person has had on your life.

Essay:
I remember the stories my dad would tell me about when he was fleeing Vietnam to make a better life for himself. He would tell me about the escape plans, all the late nights he spent studying, and working hours at a fast food joint so he could have extra money to purchase books. If anything he's taught me it's that sometimes you have to work hard than others and as unfair as that sounds it's life.

My dad is a simple man who values family the most. I still remember him picking me up from school dressed in his work uniform because he spent his lunch break driving 30 mins back to my elementary school to drop me off at the babysitter's. As a kid, I never really understood why he was always tired. I still laugh to this day thinking back when it was recital day for my ballet class, and my dad frantically figuring out how to put my hair in a bun and do my stage makeup. He eventually just asked the front desk lady to help with the makeup, but I still appreciated the effort. I feel like I matured a lot earlier than other kids because of my dad. I got into investments and politics as a kid because I wanted to know what my dad was arguing about the other grown-ups at the dinner table. It was definitely hard for my dad to relate to me being an immigrant parent and all. I hated when my dad would pack me Asian food for lunch, or when we would call me by my Vietnamese name. I never really appreciated my culture till starting middle school. I knew my dad was trying his best, he even used to bring my lunch right before the lunch bell rang so the food would be warm.

You don' really realize all the things you are grateful for. We are so used to getting what we want, that we forget to take a few steps back to remember who was there for us. For me, my hero is my dad. Although he doesn't have superpowers, he was there to give me the support I needed growing up

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{asap} select the correct text in the passage. which line in this excerpt from jonathan swift's "a modest proposal" uses the rhetorical device of irony? and secondly, there being a round million of creatures in humane figure throughout this kingdom, whose whole subsistence put into a common stock, would leave them in debt two million of pounds sterling, adding those who are beggars by profession, to the bulk of farmers, cottagers and labourers, with their wives and children, who are beggars in effect; i desire those politicians who dislike my overture, and may perhaps be so bold to attempt an answer, that they will first ask the parents of these mortals, whether they would not at this day think it a great happiness to have been sold for food at a year old, in the manner i prescribe, and thereby have avoided such a perpetual scene of misfortunes, as they have since gone through, by the oppression of landlords, the impossibility of paying rent without money or trade, the want of common sustenance, with neither house nor cloaths to cover them from the inclemencies of the weather, and the most inevitable prospect of intailing the like, or greater miseries, upon their breed for ever. i profess, in the sincerity of my heart, that i have not the least personal interest in endeavouring to promote this necessary work, having no other motive than the publick good of my country, by advancing our trade, providing for infants, relieving the poor, and giving some pleasure to the rich. i have no children, by which i can propose to get a single penny; the youngest being nine years old, and my wife past child-bearing. lines highlighted: - there being a round million of creatures in humane figure throughout this kingdom, whose whole subsistence put into a common stock, would leave them in debt two million of pounds sterling, - they have since gone through, by the oppression of landlords, the impossibility of paying rent without money or trade, the want of common sustenance, with neither house nor cloaths to cover them from the inclemencies of the weather - i have not the least personal interest in endeavouring to promote this necessary work, having no other motive than the publick good of my country, - i have no children, by which i can propose to get a single penny; the youngest being nine years old, and my wife past child-bearing.