I’m writing and essay on the book 1984, my prompt was write a speech on how Winston could convince the proles to organize and rebel against the party. i’ve gotten most of it written im stuck on in the book he says all you need is conscious and thought to rebel but how could i make into a plan to tell the proles how to do that..?

faulty parallelism is a grammar construction where there is no balance in the parts of a sentence they have a similar meaning but the grammar structure is not equivalent.

the correct version of this faulty parallelism in the sentence is:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation's third president.

the problem with the first version is that the sentence:

"jefferson was both the writer of the declaration of independence"

presents jefferson as both a subject and an agent for the verb "write" because if he was "the writer" then the declaration of independence was written by him, besides that fact, the sentence presents a dependent clause.

while the second sentence:

he was the nation's third president.

presents a basic subject+verb+object structure

so, to give a proper balance to the structure, or better said, to give a parallel structure, we must write a basic s+v+o structure in both sentences:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation third president.

he is honest with congress and america about the difficulty of the war ahead.

son.

a. is the correct answer

i cannot see a paragraph to answer the question