Add a citation to the student's essay, if necessary. The original passage is below. Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone
- a book by J. K. Rowling, chapter 11, page 144.

Hermione had become a bit more relaxed about breaking rules since Harry and Ron
had saved her from the mountain troll, and she was much nicer for it.

Part of a student's essay:
Hermione becomes "a bit more relaxed about breaking
rules" after her run-in with the troll.

Hermione had become a bit more relaxed about breaking rules since Harry and Ron  had saved her from the mountain troll, and she was much nicer for it.

Hermione was kinder because Harry and Ron saved her from the mountain troll.

1. alliteration

2. wistful

question

will give

you will find groups such as germans, acadians, irish/scots, french, spanish, anglo/americans, african americans, and native americans. you are looking for the contributions that each of these groups provided to the settlement of louisiana.