What is the correct way to rewrite sentences 27 and 28? A. So in the best interest of my studies, my music, and my social life, I
respectfully request that you let me have my own room.
B. It’s in the best interest of my studies, my music, and my social life,
therefore, I respectfully request that you let me have my own room.
C. It’s in the best interest of my studies, my music, and my social life, so I
respectfully request. That you let me have my own room.
D. The sentences are written correctly in the passage.

(27) So in the best interest of my studies, my
music, and my social life. (28) I respectfully request that you let me have my
own room.

A. So in the best interest of my studies, my music, and my social life, I  respectfully request that you let me have my own room.

Explanation:

The best way to revise sentences 27 and 28 is: So in the best interest of my studies, my music, and my social life, I  respectfully request that you let me have my own room.

In fact, sentence 27 can't even be called a sentence. A sentence must contain a subject and predicate and express a complete thought. Sentence 27 doesn't have any of those elements. However, when we connect it to sentence 28 (which has truly is a sentence), we get one grammatically correct expanded sentence.

Option B is the second best option, but it sounds more awkward than option A.

Option C is incorrect because neither of the sentences is complete, and we already explained why option D isn't correct either.

That leaves us with option A as the correct one.

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