Essay Structure 8:Question 2 Which one of the following sentences represents a strong concludi
statement for an essay?
Select one:
Police dog units are also a great asset to police departments to use to control crime i
some neighborhoods.
Neighborhoods with community watch programs are three times less likely to
experience minor crimes such as theft and vandalism.
Imagine if you could help stop crime in your neighborhood just by talking to your
neighbors.
If community members do not get involved with watching their own neighborhoods,
they might be vulnerable to major and minor crimes.

neighborhoods with community watch programs are less likely to experience minor crimes such as theft and vandalism

honestly, school in itself just seems to be a huge waste of time. a lot of people graduate but still end up not doing anything in college anyways, which really makes the whole point of graduating seem useless. i'd rather not bring anyone's hopes up then. what i'd recommend is for whoever's reading this to simply drop out.

i mean, kanye did it. he said something along the lines of, "don't let society tell you what to do." now, he's obviously a very successful person, and since his album is called the college dropout i guess he never really had to go through all that nonsense in order to become a millionaire. the same goes for anyone else then.

type of error:

the error in the sentence is a "dangling modifier". a dangling modifier is a phrase, word or clause that "dangles" because there is not target to modify. in this case, "after mopping the floor" is the dangling modifier since it has no word to modify. the noun "house" cannot mop the floor; therefore there is a mistake in the writing of the sentence.