In the following lines, why the author didn't write the whole sentence in one line? "die, Into the valley
of Death Rode the
Six hundred" ?*
(A lot of point) ;) please help

The answer is below

Explanation:

He wanted to express the reader to make them read more, and author is trying persuade the reader to continue reader the book.

Also in speech writing, they leave gaps to each dialogue a person says, but this looks like, the author did this on purpose to get their mind fixed to on what there are reading.

Hope you understand

:-)

by Alfred Lord Tennyson

Half a league, half a league, Half a league onward, All in the valley of Death Rode the six hundred. "Forward, the Light Brigade! Charge for the guns!" he said: Into the valley of Death Rode the six hundred.

lets none because you provide no details.

at the beginning of the story, elisa just has the small idea of wanting more attention, but as the story progressed, her desire for more attention grew larger. before she talked to the man with the wagon she was just focused on her chrysanthemums but when she talked to him and got some attention she enjoyed it, so she decided to get all dolled up for henry. but when they were on the way to dinner she was so upset because she saw the flowers on the side of the road and realized the man didn't take interest in her like she thought.