I need help girls can you check my poem pls its a love poems I made A million stars up in the sky one shines brighter I cant deny
A love so precise a love so true a love that comes from me to you
The angles sing when you are near
In your arms I got nothing to fear
Talking to you makes my day
Your the only girl that makes me smile
And together forever never to part

Hi its amazing but try to use more words

Explanation:

They r gonna be great like u :)

It's really good! Just change angles to angels in line 5 and your to you're in line 8.

the correct answer is d. a discussion of specific uses of alliteration

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when you are critiquing or evaluating a poem, you will mostly pay attention to the theme, as well as figures of speech and rhythm. alliteration is a figure of speech where consonants are repeated in neighboring words - and it is important for analysis of sound and rhythm, which is why it might appear in the evaluation of that poem.

but it is sometime nessary to hit key points or subjects   but is sometimes to much reveiw if there was a way to slim down the redone work it would improve for every body.