Read this sentence from a writer's first draft. She walked across the room.
Another student recommended that the writer replace some of the words in the sentence to help readers visualize the story more vividly. Which sentence provides the BEST replacement?
A. The waitress dashed across the kitchen.
B. She walked across the room like a happy child.
C. She slowly walked across the dirty room.
D. Across the room she walked. I know for sure it’s not D or C!