Excerpt from Dr. Farber’s Tenth-Grade Lesson Mary McCormick Statement from the passage (paragraph 4): I silently nodded, taken aback by the enthusiastic salutations. Revised statement from the passage I silently nodded, taken aback by the overbearing salutations. What effect does the word choice have on the revised statement? A) It makes it more negative. B) It makes it less judgmental. C) It makes it less descriptive. D) It makes it more lighthearted.