"The old me looked beautiful. Skinny and beautiful. Also unhealthy." Please help me grammatically correct this sentence without changing the tone.

The old me looked beautiful, skinny, and unhealthy.

Explanation:

the old me was beautiful and skinny, but it was unhealthy.

well idk if im right cause u know but any ways i belive that its civil

the pronoun reference replaces a noun, but you have to make sure there's no room for confusion.

in the first sentence "her" could be referring to shely or to the sister. the answer there is "shelly called her sister and told her about the new baby."

in the second sentence "it" could be referring to the roof or the floor. the answer there is "since the roof leaks on the family room floor, we need to repair the roof."