Which question would you ask if you want specific feedback from your peer reviewers about the plot of your story?

A. What do you want to know about?

B. Are my characters believable?

C. Did the conflict build and resolve in interesting ways?

D. Did the opening adequately introduce the main characters?

answer: this is easy, i found "it"

i will repeat the question again, "find it."

here, i located it.

i am a strong (insert gender here) my father and his brother were to, they were killed not by the cold, not by the bears or wolves that roam our streets at night, but by the   bolsheviks. we must stand up and fight communism or we all end up dead, starved dehydrated, enslaved. the time is now we must fight. lenin is a dangerous man but he can be stopped. so my comrades we shall siege there weapons tonight on ward. (rides away with ak(not invented yet) and sword in hand while on bear into snowstorm)