Evaluate Equiano’s sentence fluency. Once, for a few days, I was let out to fit a vessel, and I had no victuals allowed me by either party; at last I told my master of this treatment, and he took me away from it. In many of the estates, on the different islands where I used to be sent for rum or sugar, they would not deliver it to me, or any other negro; he was therefore obliged to send a white man along with me to those places; and then he used to pay him from fix to ten pisterines a day.

—The Interesting Narrative of the Life

of Olaudah Equiano

Overall, the fluency is best described as

natural and flowing.

choppy and incomplete.

loose and unstructured.

inconsistent and unconnected.

Overall, the fluency is best described as  natural and flowing.

Explanation:

Fluency is the flow or frequency of the rhythm of the narration. It involves the smoothness or ease with which a story is narrated or told.

In his autobiography "The Interesting Narrative of the Life of Olaudah Equiano", the author and narrator Olaudah Equiano narrates how he was treated as a slave. The book is a work that is intended to bring the plight of the slaves for the whole world to witness and see the discrimination they faced. The particular passage/ excerpt provided in the question possess a fluency that is natural and free-flowing, possessing no hard words or any real complications in the flow of the narration.

in this text, paine use the word “ye” several times in order to  capture  the  attention of the colonists who   haven't understand the   importance and urgency of his cause. the word "ye" that is the plural of   "thou" is used to call the colonists attention and make the fight for the cause.

aye how much for a gram of crack my homie jeremy needs it he is a horn dog.