How should I start my first body paragraph? I have attached an image of what my introductory paragraph looks like. This essay is about the time I was judged other than the content of my character. I'll comment more info if you need it.

so the first thing that you will want to do is come up with an engaging sentence to start your first body paragraph. an example of this could be something like bullies have been something I've dealt with all my life. next you're going to want to provide specific examples of this bullying. next you're going to want to include just some basic evidence to support this reason. and finally you're going to want to conclude your paragraph with a good transition to the next one. examples of a good concluding sentence for your paragraph would be bullying has left me with enough insecurities to last a lifetime.

closer examination, however, finds the mcdonald's kind of job highly uneducational in several ways. far from providing opportunities for entrepreneurship (the lemonade stand) or self- discipline, self-supervision, and self-scheduling (the paper route), most teen jobs these days are highly structured — what social scientists call “highly routinized.”  

true, you still have to have the gumption to get yourself over to the hamburger stand, but once you don the prescribed uniform, your task is spelled out in minute detail.