English, 16.10.2020 03:01 jay13212

Judy asked sarah to help her edit the following paragraph. identify the correct example of EDITING “Tony and Mark decided to open a coffe shop on the corner of elm Street and 8th Avenue. Much to their shock, in the first week Tony and Mark made no sales and begin to worry if their business endeavor was a smart one With $10,000 dollars from the bank the two men purchase all the supplies needed to begin their first week. After a little advertisng and free samples, the shop is doing much better.”

A sarah corrects the spelling of the word advertising in the last sentence

B Sarah informs Judy that the essay is not organized properly

C Sarah suggests to Judy that she have a solid thesis statement

D Sarah suggests to Judy that the paragraph should be coherent

* i typed everything word for word hence the spelling mistakes
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