Read this excerpt from a student's analytical ennay, I think poetry allows Alice to communicate more effectively with the unusual citizens of the
Looking-Glass land,
2. Which is the best way to revise this sentence to give it a more formal style? (1 point)
Delete the casual phrase "I think."
Delete the word "unusual."
Revise the entire sentence,
Revise some of the word choices,

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Explanation:

Revise the sentence below to make it more formal: 'You're going to get really fat if you ... C. when the person or thing performing the action is a proper noun ... Provide additional support for the topic sentence, and revise the whole paragraph ..

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huck's relationship with food is a prominent theme throughout the novel, and during his time on jackson's island and working his way down river, huck revels in and enjoys his ad hoc dining. in the first chapter, we observe huck is ironically trapped in a "civilized" world, when he would prefer to live freely in nature.