Describe a personal philosophy of your own that has guided you on your current journey.

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ian mortimer in his book "the time traveller's guide to elizabethan england" uses a narrative in his style, which successfully conveys a clear description of the life in england in the 16th century. he writes in second person, which makes it comfortable to reader and easy to understand, he captures the readers attention with views of the landscape, the streets, the people including rich and poor. he also depicts some cultural traits from how people behave, eat or what they wear. his descriptions range from the social, economical, the political power to the examples of the life of common people. it could be tell that this book is about social history rather than a   novel.

i'm supposing that we would have to correct any words in there, i guess.

rephrase: "about an hour after dinner, i'd like to chat with my friend".

we made sure to put the future tense, and also making sure that we put commas and punctuation.