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Can someone proofread this and tell me if I need to add any grammar or punctuation errors or spelling errors? Yes, The lithosphere and biosphere did interact during this event. First, snow, ice, and several entire glaciers melted causing mudslides up to 50 miles. This is extremely terrible because people can not live in things buried in mud nor can they survive in a town full of mud. Second, The forest was reduced to wastelands. thousands of animals were killed and 57 people died. This can become a problem because with animals being killed we can not get food to supply markets or factroys with meat and with people dieing the population will decrease. Third, Areas that received a very thin layer of ash gained an increase of crop production. Now this doesn't really sound bad, that's not the case it was actually good because we need crops for food and with more crops they could supply to people that needed food or that were affected by this event. Lassly, This proves that the Lithosphere and biosphere di infact interact with each other.

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