Read the sentence. Dave received an A on his essay.

Which is the best way to revise this sentence using descriptive detail and sensory words?

The lines that make up an A were written on Dave’s essay at the top of his paper.
Dave hoped to receive an A on his essay, and it turned out he did receive the A he wanted.
When Dave’s essay was returned to him by Mrs. Capri, he saw an A written at the top.
The crisp, sharp lines of an A were etched in thick blue marker at the top of Dave’s essay.

The crisp, sharp lines of an A were etched in thick blue marker at the top of Dave's essay.

Explanation:

This is the best answer as it is asking for descriptive and sensory details.

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