The following is a student draft. It may contain errors. (1) Tent, tarp, sleeping bags, backpacks, warm clothes (for those cool mountain nights), two coolers (one with sodas for the drive), a shopping bag full of marshmallows, hotdog and hamburger buns, chips—yup, it looked like we had everything. (2) We said goodbye to my mom and sister and headed out. (3) This was going to be great—just my dad and I hiking, canoeing, and roasting marshmallows for three whole days. (4) The sun was just coming up as we pulled onto the road. (5) The drive across the valley to Yosemite takes about three hours, and there's not much to see. (6) It's mostly just straight flat highway through mile after mile of tomato fields. (7) I told my dad that someone must like ketchup more than I do. (8) He laughed. (9) But then he reminded me that I was rather fond of spaghetti and pizza sauce. (10) I couldn't argue with that. (11) When we got to our campground, it was already crowded. (12) Nonetheless, by some miracle, there were one open right across from the showers. (13) Someone must have just left the campgrounds. (14) We grabbed the spot, jumped out of the car and breathed in the mountain air. (15) After piling the food on the picnic table, we got to work setting up the tent. (16) That done, we built a fire in the grate and roasted hot dogs for an early lunch. (17) That afternoon, the whole next day, and the morning of the day after that, we hiked and swam and canoed during the day and roasted hot dogs and hamburgers and marshmallows in the evenings. (18) And we talked. (19) My dad told me stories of things he did when he was my age and what it was like growing up back then. (20) I told him the things I wanted to do with my life. (21) On the drive home, we were both pretty quiet. (22) We were tired. (23) But it was a good kind of tired. (24) We were tired from an adventure that neither of us would ever forget. 2 Select the correct answer. Which detail would be best to add after sentence 14 to convey the experience of breathing in the mountain air? A. Immediately our nostrils were filled with numerous scents of life as we walked into the bustling campground. B. The air felt good after the long hours in the car, and we felt ready to get out and explore the area. C. Immediately our nostrils were filled with the sweet smells of pine trees that surrounded the campground. D. The air was surprisingly cool for the middle of July, and we were happy for a break from the heat. I NEED IT NOW