Respond to a post on a message board with a two-paragraph post of your own. Choose a post that makes a claim you disagree with. Then write your own claim in response. You'll back up your claim with rhetorical appeals to the audience and evidence from at least one online source. Your assignment should include the following elements: -A clear claim that responds to a counterclaim -The use of persuasive appeals -Evidence from at least one online source that supports your argument

i believe the answer is: b. mr. head had a long, tube-like face with a rounded open jaw and a short depressed nose.

this is because in the un-revised sentence it said that mr. heads face was long and tube-like, and he had a rounded open jaw. this is not a very grammatically correct because of how it seems to drag on with the and, replaced with, with, makes it sound more fluent in the description.

i believe it’s the first one, but it could be the second! not the third or fourth.

explanation:

here's some tricks. write on a book that you have read and really enjoyed. first, start by writing down basic event in the book. have your first paragraph be an intro explaining like the author, the reason the book was written if known, and other backround info like that. paragraph two explain what happens in the first few chapters and the signifigance it had. then for paragraph 3, do the same thing but for the middle. i'm pretty sure you get the point for paragraph 4. just rap things up and explain the call to action. for the final paragragh (paragraph 5) , explain your views on the book, the message, ect. tip: something that might is to go onto cliff notes or something and read the anaylisis of each chapter.

some books i recommend;

diary of anne frank

lord of the flies