Read the beginning of Denise's personal narrative. What problem needs to be fixed in Denise's narrative?
1. Mr. Thompson loves teaching science. 2. Every
single day, he becomes very excited about what he is
talking about. 3. He waves his hands around, and
asks, "Isn't this amazing?" 4. All of his students love
his enthusiasm.
O Denise needs to add a strong example of Mr
Thompson's enthusiasm.
O Denise needs to include herself as a character in
the narrative.
O Denise needs to add a time relationship between
sentences 3 and 4.
O Denise needs to change the pronoun "he" to the
pronoun "we."

Option 2.) Denise needs to include herself as a character in the narrative.

Explanation:

Why? Because if this is a personal narrative, you always have to include yourself. If you don't include yourself in a personal narrative... then it's not a personal narrative, but in the first statement, it says "Read the beginning of Denise's personal narrative." So, we now know why Option 2 is the best answer. I hope this helps and leave a comment if it does!

everyman: morality play

which phrase in this excerpt from the play everyman refers to god's judgment of people's souls after their death?

messenger: . .

ye think sin in the beginning full sweet,

which in( the end) causeth thy soul to weep,

when the body lieth in clay.

here shall you see how fellowship and jollity,

both strength, pleasure, and beauty,

will fade from thee as flower in may.

for ye shall hear, how our heavenly king

calleth everyman to a (general reckoning):

give audience, and hear what he doth say.

god: i perceive here in my majesty,

how that all the creatures be to me unkind,

living without dread in worldly prosperity:

of (ghostly sight) the people be so blind,

drowned in sin, they know me not for their god;

in worldly riches is all their mind,

they fear not( my righteousness), the sharp rod;

(my law that i shewed), when i for them die

hopefully this !