Revise the sentence below to correct the lack of parallel structure. Be sure that your revised sentence uses the active voice and is in the perfect tense.
The dog is being walked by Eli after Eli had finished his homework

Eli had walked the dog after he had finished his homework.

Explanation:

Active voice is when the subject does the action (Eli had walked the dog instead of the dog had been walked by Eli) and perfect tense is when an action had happened and uses the verb to have.  Parallel structure is when all of the verbs use the same tense.  (Eli had walked the dog after he had finished his homework, not Eli is walking the dog after he had finished his homework.  it does not make sense because it is using two verb tenses.)

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)

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