Read the advertisement. For vim and vigor, drink VitaSip! This amazing new sports drink will make you feel energetic, clear-headed, and ready to face the world. VitaSip is chock full of the vitamins and minerals your body needs for optimum health. What’s more, VitaSip tastes good. So sip your way to better health. Drink VitaSip—It’s sip-ly delicious! Which revision would make the advertisement more persuasive?

Persuasive techniques that could be used:

- rhetorical questions - a question designed to make the reader think; doesn’t need an answer.

- triples - to repeat an idea or image three times, usually in a slightly different way.

- opinion as fact - to present beliefs as if they are factual truths.

- superlative - adjective to imply the highest or lowest quality

- emotive language - words and phrases to make the reader feel something.

- pronouns - refers to people to identify the reader/writer relationship.

- flattery - saying nice things about the reader to get them on your side.

I really hope this was helpful :)

If you look at the surrounding words, you can get a general basis of what another word for inviolate would be. i would say that it is pristine