How could this paragraph be revised so that it is correct?

Read the paragraph.

Even though my life is very busy, I spend as much time as I can with my family. I often ask my dad, who is an excellent athlete, to play soccer with me. I also enjoy taking walks, baking desserts, and playing cards with my mom. However, nothing is better than watching movies with my loyal, black cat, Max.

How should this paragraph be revised so that it is correct?

The word “soccer” should be capitalized.

The comma after “however” should be removed.

The word “cat” should be capitalized.

The comma after “loyal” should be removed.

The comma after “loyal” should be removed.

Explanation:

The removal of the comma after the word "loyal" is necessary because the words "loyal" and *black" are adjectives describing the cat and shouldn't be separated by a comma.

A comma serves different functions in grammar which includes introducing a pause in a sentence and there is no need for the pause because the adjectives are about a common thing and not a separate idea.

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explanation: sorry thats all i could give i cant see the passage really

the sentence that best describes the tone of the passage from the radio broadcast compared to the passage from the book is b. the radio broadcast has a more surprised tone.

consider the text evidence: in the passage from the book, the description is more matter-of-fact. it is simply describing the things resembling little grey snakes, but there is no urgency in the description. on the other hand, in the passage from the radio broadcast, there is definetely urgency (you can tell from the expression used, "good heavens", which clearly indicates surprise.)