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The following sentence needs to be revised, edited, and proofread.
Dogs are the best types of pet most dogs are easy to take care off their fun to be around and their always happy too see you.
Choose the most effective revision.
Dogs are the best type of pet most dogs are easy to take care of, they are fun to be around, and they are always happy to see you.
O Dogs are the best type of pet and most dogs are easy to take care of they are fun to be around and they are always happy to see you.
O Dogs are the best type of pet, most dogs are easy to take care of, they are fun to be around, and they are always happy to see you.
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Dogs are the best type of pet. Most dogs are easy to take care of, they are fun to be around, and they are always happy to see you.
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Dogs are the best type of pet. Most dogs are easy to take care of, they are fun to be around, and they are always happy to see you.

Explanation:

The best type of revision to the sentence(s) above is the aforementioned one.

The un-revised version is "Dogs are the best types of pet most dogs are easy to take care off their fun to be around and their always happy too see you."

We can see here that this was not properly punctuated which makes reading it erratic, and understanding it quite difficult.

To properly revise it, the use of the punctuation comma and periods(full stop) were necessary. Also the capitalization of the first letter after the full stop was required.

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one thing blogging and good copywriting share is a conversational style, and that means it’s fine to fracture the occasional rule of proper grammar in order to communicate effectively. both bloggers and copywriters routinely end sentences with prepositions, dangle a modifier in a purely technical sense, or make liberal use of the ellipsis when an em dash is the correct choice-all in order to write in the way people actually speak. but there are other mistakes that can detract from your credibility. while we all hope what we have to say is more important than some silly grammatical error, the truth is some people will not subscribe or link to your blog if you make dumb mistakes when you write, and buying from you will be out of the question.