What is the best way to revise the paragraph to create sentence variety?
What is the best way to revise the paragraph to
effectively use transitions?

The best way to revise the paragraph to create sentence variety is the following:

- Combine the third and fourth sentences.

The best way to revise the paragraph to effectively use transitions is the following:

- Add "as a result" to the start of the last sentence.

The paragraph we are analyzing here is:

"(1) Laughter yoga was created in the 1990's by Dr. Madan Kataria and has brought humor to the exercise world. (2) The practice is similar to traditional yoga, but it includes laughter. (3) Participants are often people who are living with chronic illnesses and pain. (4) Participants have experienced healing from the exercise. (5) Many people have signed up for the program."

- Participants, who are often people living with chronic illnesses and pain, have experienced healing from the experience.

- As a result, many people have signed up for the program.

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In general, use sentences of different lengths. Also consider moving adverbs or adverb clauses from the end of a sentence to the beginning.

For transitions, think about the relationship between ideas. Is it a time sequence? Use words like first, then, after that, finally. If it's logic, use words like because, since this... then that. Or therefore, as a result.

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