Which is the best critique explaining why Henrique should revise the paraphrase?
Henrique needs to change the sequence of events to be
in a logical order.
Henrique needs to add some descriptive language to
make the story come alive.
Henrique needs to add some dialogue to make the point
of view consistent
Henrique needs to change the point of view to make the
sequence clearer.

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use of language is very important in order to write in a good way. each literary genre has its different exploitation of language and, therefore, many differences and similarities can emerge. shakespeare's work (romeo and juliet) is a sample of a drama. its language is full of dialogue to describe the beauty of first love in people; everything it's pink color. it briefly describes fictional scenes and situations. on the other hand, the calypso borealis, by john muirs, it's narrative essay: its language is full of descriptions to describe an experience, a real experience. hyperbole is not used as in drama genre. he falls in love with discovering a real place and his direct feelings.

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fiction/fantasy

explanation:

jenkins wanted the narrator to write a ghost story for his magazine. he wanted the narrator to give the readers a story based on the supernatural. he wanted him to give the readers real 'horror' stories and not the type of live ghosts which he had presented in his earlier stories.