Brief paragraph about an adventure you have had. (75-100 words)

Hi, today I will be talking about what an adventure I had! This is an Adventure across the entire world! First, let’s talk about California, One day I went to California to see so many beautiful there, Also Universal Studios! I see many things and it is crazy! The world has just some goods things inside them but not all. Some places like Africa is poor, I went to Africa to see, they wear No shoes they are barefoot! Not a lot though, some wear shoes. But sometimes those shoes are donated. You see a lot of places are poor and a lot are rich.

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c.to compare several aspects of the tragedy to other worldwide tragedies