What is the best way for Colleen to revise the paragraph to effectively use transitions? by adding the transition For example to the beginning of sentence 1
by adding the transition though before the phrase other districts in sentence 2
by replacing the phrase According to research with the transition Indeed in sentence 3
by replacing the word than with the transition as well as in sentence 3

Read the excerpt from “take the tortillas out of your poetry.” i do not believe we should have to leave out the crucial elements of our language and culture to contribute to american literature, but, unfortunately, this is a conclusion i am forced to reach. i have been writing for a quarter century, and have been a published author for eighteen years. as a writer, i was part of the chicano movement which created a new literature in this country. which type of rhetoric is used most in the excerpt to convince readers that anaya’s conclusion is accurate? an appeal based on emotion an appeal based on logic an appeal based on the author’s character an appeal based on the author’s feelings