I just want some feedback, thanks! Here is my rough draft

National landmarks are a part of our nations history. Landmarks commonly represent something that happened in the past, including wars and big events. Using public money to maintain these landmarks, is something that would be beneficial. If we do use public money to maintain them, then more generations will be able to experience them. 

             When landmarks deteriorate, current and future generations are no longer able to see the landmarks. An example of these landmarks deteriorating, is the Statue of Liberty. In 1875 when the statue of liberty was built it had the color of copper. However, due to the copper reacting to the sun, the color has changed to the green that it is today. Because of its color becoming green, current and future generations are unable to see the original copper color.

             National Landmarks also give students an opportunity to learn more about our nation's history. Visiting National landmarks also gives students an educational experience outside of their classrooms. This can give students a better understanding of our past as a nation. It also gives teachers new teaching opportunities. I would have many things to write about, because I'm from a navy family, and have been to a lot of different places.

              In conclusion, we should maintain, and preserve our national landmarks. They are part of our nation's history. They also give students a better learning experience and teachers better teaching opportunities. These are all reasons why we should use public money to maintain landmarks.

Ajourney with my father adapted from my reminiscences by sir rabindranath tagore probably in order to teach me to be careful, my father placed a little small change in my charge and required me to keep an account of it. he also entrusted me with the duty of winding his valuable gold watch for him. he overlooked the risk of damage in his desire to train me to a sense of responsibility. when we went out together for our morning walk, he would ask me to give alms to any beggars we came across. but i never could render him a proper account at the end of it. one day, my balance was larger than the account warranted. "i really must make you my cashier," observed my father. "money seems to have a way of growing in your hands! " that watch of his i wound up with such indefatigable1 zeal that it had very soon to be sent to the watchmaker's in calcutta. i am reminded of the time when, later in life, i was appointed to manage the estate and had to lay before my father, owing to his failing eyesight, a statement of accounts on the second or third of every month. i had first to read out the totals under each head, and if he had any doubts on any point, he would ask for the details. if i made any attempt to slur over or keep out of sight any item which i feared he would not like, it was sure to come out. so, these first few days of the month were very anxious ones for me. as i have said, my father had the habit of keeping everything clearly before his mind—whether figures of accounts, or ceremonial arrangements, or additions or alterations to property. he had never seen the new assembly hall built at bolpur, and yet, he was familiar with every detail of it from questioning those who came to see him after a visit to bolpur. he had an extraordinary memory, and when once he got hold of a fact, it never escaped him. my father asked me to copy the favourite verses, with their translation, from the book he liked reading every day. at home, i had been a boy of no account. here, when these important functions were entrusted to me, i felt the glory of the situation. 1. tireless 7 how does the narrator support the idea that his father keeps everything clearly before his mind? a. by giving the example of his father's response when his account did not tally with the money that he had in hand b. by mentioning that his father was interested in everything that happened around him c. by giving the example of his father knowing every detail of the new assembly hall at bolpur d. by mentioning that his father had marked his favorite verses from his favorite book