100 poin .
As her sister drove Shonda to the police station, questions
ping-ponged through her mind. Where had Sam and his cousin
really been? How did they even come in contact with the police?
What is this "misunderstanding"? Sam had never been involved in
any trouble, much less legal trouble. Did she really know Sam?A
scene flashed into Shonda's mind. Her wedding day. Shonda looked
beautiful in her wedding dress with the long white train trailing
behind it, and Sam looked as handsome as he ever had. They
smiled as they recited their vows. As she reflected on this day,
Shonda's heart began to slow and she smiled for the first time
since the phone had rung. In this portion of the narrative, the author uses
a flashback to develop the relationship between Shonda and Sam. However,
the flashback does not address the questions that Shonda asks in the
paragraph before it, making the character's response in the paragraph after
the flashback illogical. Rewrite the flashback scene, so it develops the
relationship between the characters seen later in the story. (100 poin for one paragraph of answer)