Revise the sentence to state the meaning in fewer words. Avoid passive voice, needless repetition, and wordy phrases and clauses.
In the not too distant future, college freshmen must all become aware of the fact that there is a need for them to make contact with an
academic adviser concerning the matter of a major.
a. When choosing a major, college freshmen will soon need to become more aware that they need to work
with their advisors.
b. In the near future, college students will need to become more attuned to the fact that they need to consult
with their advisors when choosing their majors.
C. College freshmen will soon need to realize that they need to work with an academic advisor in choosing a
major.
d. Soon college freshmen must realize that they need to contact their advisors about their choices of majors.

Read the sentence. the great wave was inexpensive to purchase, costing only about the same as a double of noodles. since lots of copies could be printed and still look good, it made loads of money. which best revises this sentence to create a more formal style and tone? *the great wave was as cheap as buying a double of noodles. since lots of copies could be made and still look great, people started making piles of money. *the great wave was inexpensive to purchase, costing about the same as a double of noodles. since mass quantities could be produced and still look exquisite, it became highly profitable to sell. *the great wave cost next to nothing, practically the same as a double of noodles. since mass quantities could be produced and still look awesome, it became highly profitable to sell. *the great wave was inexpensive to purchase, similar to buying a double of noodles. since lots of copies could be made that still looked amazing, those who sold it made tons of money.