How can you revise this paragraph to expand the variety of sentence
patterns? Dogs make wonderful pets, golden retrievers are especially
friendly. I have two golden retrievers; both are very sweet. My parents
have greyhounds, they are a bit more nervous than my dogs.

Select one:
Remove some independent clauses.

Add more independent clauses.

Shorten all of the sentences.

Expand the topic to include cats.

How does kennedy describe the children who might benefit from medical space technology

Which work would represent a change to the artistic medium of this original work?

You are to write a five paragraph literary essay based on one of the 4 prompts and what you have read and learned in this module. these are your options: 1. how do the events of "the white umbrella" teach the narrator a lesson about shame and acceptance? 2. what role does creativity play in "the bat-poet"? 3. how does the character of squeaky change over the course of "raymond's run"? 4. discuss the influences of older family members on the protagonists and speakers in the stories and poems of this unit. you are to write a five paragraph literary essay based on what you have read and learned in this module. your final submission should meet the following requirements. • submit completed pre-writing and outline documents. • write an essay that contains an introduction with hook and thesis statement, supporting paragraphs with evidence and at least one quotation, and a conclusion that restates the thesis and reviews main points. • use transitions appropriate to the pattern of organization. • use vocabulary to create tone and voice. • cite primary source (quotation). • submit completed revision checklist. • vary sentence structure. • create sentences with parallel structures. • use technology in the writing process.