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One of the most unusual of all tall tale animals is the sidehill dodger. It spends its entire life on
a single hdl. This is because the legs on the downhill side of the dodger are longer than the legs
of the uphill side. The dodger can run more quickly than a horse. It will only run around and
around the bill. It can't go up or down the hill at all without tangling its legs. This has given
it the worst temper of any beast in the entire world. A sidehill dodger is almost always angry.
Luckily, the dodger isn't too hard to avoid. Just wait until it is almost upon you. Take two of
three steps downhill. There the dodger can't reach you. It will gnash and stomp and rush away
to hide in shame. The dodgers are almost always ashamed and hiding. That is why you hardly
see one.

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Read the sentence below about the chicago fire of 1871. schaffer told someone else to strike the wrong alarm box and that caused a miscommunication during the chicago fire of 1871. which revision is the best example of adding concrete details? schaffer told another person in his office to sound the wrong alarm and that caused a big miscommunication during the chicago fire. schaffer told his assistant to strike the wrong alarm box and that caused a miscommunication during the massive chicago fire of 1871. schaffer mistakenly told his assistant to strike alarm box 342 instead of the correct box and that caused a miscommunication during a fire in chicago. schaffer mistakenly told his assistant to strike alarm box 342, and as a result, firefighters were directed to an incorrect location during the chicago fire of 1871.