"cultivation stopped...in papas rock garden, the moss was fry, the sand needed raking" The author makes the most effective use of this passage by?
A. comparing and contrasting two disparate elements his character.
B. using the literature element of setting to advance the plot of the story
C. making use of a strong simile to match the events mood
D. using figurative language to describe an unusual event

The answer is not D.

Explanation:

I took a test and D. was incorrect. So this narrows it down a bit, hope this is helpful in some way.

its called a consonant

type of error:

the error in the sentence is a "dangling modifier". a dangling modifier is a phrase, word or clause that "dangles" because there is not target to modify. in this case, "after mopping the floor" is the dangling modifier since it has no word to modify. the noun "house" cannot mop the floor; therefore there is a mistake in the writing of the sentence.