Read the student sample essay and think about which Which facts, details, or quotations would make this
revisions would make it more effective
argument stronger? Select all that apply
Universal health care is unfair, because it means that
a quotation from the American Lung Association
everyone has to pay taxes to take care of people who
do not even choose to take care of themselves. For a detail about how to stop smoking
example, people make choices about their health, such a statistic about how much smoking-related
as whether to smoke. If people choose to smoke, they
diseases cost the United States last year
will have more health problems than people who
the average adult smoker's health costs
choose to be healthy
Da statistic about how much money the country
would save if all smokers had health care