Read the sentence from a student's critical analysis
essay.
In the Declaration of Independence, Thomas Jefferson talks about independence through his use of big words and fancy
argument skills.
Which is the best revision to the sentence?
Thomas Jefferson put difficult words and strong argumentative abilities to work when he wrote the Declaration of
Independence
In the Declaration of Independence, Thomas Jefferson uses his command of the English language to make a powerful
argument for American independence.
Thomas Jefferson uses fanciful words and great arguments to make a case for American independence in the Declaration of
Independence.
In the Declaration of Independence, Thomas Jefferson talks using sophisticated words to make a good case so that Britain
will give Americans their independence.
No