Hiking is a very enjoyable activity. Hiking is a way to stay in shape. Hiking is a way to enjoy the great outdoors. Hiking with others is a way to build long-lasting friendships. There are free hiking trails all over the United States. A quick search on the internet will pull up hiking trails that are near you. Hiking trails are often labeled using several criteria. Some hiking trails are listed by length. Some hiking trails are listed by level of difficulty of terrain. Some hiking trails are listed by features they possess. Some hiking trails lead up to overlooks. Some hiking trails lead to waterfalls or other large bodies of water. Don’t go hiking too late in the day. Be sure to bring a snack. Be sure to wear appropriate clothing. Wear clothes that are warm enough for current temperatures. Wear hiking boots. Don’t go too fast. Have a great time in the great outdoors.
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Revise this passage to make it more unified and coherent. Add transitions between ideas, combine sentences, and make connections between information clearer.

Hiking is a very enjoyable activity as well as a way to stay in shape. It is a way to enjoy the great outdoors, and hiking with others is a way to build long-lasting friendships. There are free hiking trails all over the United States, and a quick search on the internet will pull up hiking trails that are near you. Hiking trails are often labeled using several criteria such as length, difficulty of terrain, but some are listed by feature they possess such as overlooks, waterfalls, or bodies of water. Don't go hiking too late in the day, and be sure to bring a snack. Be sure to wear appropriate clothing and shoes that are warm enough for the current temperature. Don't go too fast, and have a great time in the great outdoors.

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1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)

do you know the story wonder?

well on wonder it has different stories from each person and they can all share their thoughts and feeling each not just one. if there was one you would only get to see one persons thoughts and feelings. so do a story point on multiple of the main characters.

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