Who can correct this composition about me ,I have many grammatical mistakes : My name is Marcel Alexandru , I am a 17-year-old boy who goes to high school, I am very friendly, I always seek to discover something new. About my passions I can say that I am an amateur sports I mean practice them (more sports), but not at the level of performance. I really like to ride a bike, play a shampoo and many others for example, to travel especially in the mountains I love to go on hiking trails. I am a family man and I very much want to be united in the family with as few arguments but as many smiles (I'm not saying that there are arguments in me I said as an idea). I can say I like to go out with only my best friends, I like fun and try new things. I'm one of the smartest students in my class. It's very important, in my opinion, how you talk to a person and how you interact with others. I'm a disciplined and calm person, I don't like to get involved in pointless conflicts, especially for a game. In my spare time I like to play football, hang out with friends and spend time in front of the computer. I train at the Football Sports Club "Zimbru Chisinau" i play in the position of defensive midfielder and I love this position. Although I don't practice them at the performance level, I try to keep in shape and have fun through these means. My flaw, I think, is that there are some situations where I get extremely angry very quickly, especially those where I know I'm right, but my opinion is rejected. About my city I can say guaranteed that it is an amazingly beautiful city, with charming Moldovans and respectful people. We have a lot of parks, lots of bars and nightclubs in it. As hobbies would be cycling and also gaming. I do not practice a high level gaming, hurtce the game that allows me PC. As a rule, I put my heart into everything I do, as long as I'm interested and take into account any advice I've received, no matter who it's given. I'm currently a student at Al. I. Cuza High School of Technology, and I'm in the 11th grade. I'm not so good at putting myself in value with words, I think it's the facts that matter. I'm not the kind of person who's too upset. I'm optimistic and consider myself a lucky person in every way. I love smart people who have an opinion or something to say, but unfortunately these days you rarely see anything like this. That's who I am!

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My name is Marcel Alexandru, I am a 17-year-old boy who goes to high school, I am very friendly, I always seek to discover something new. About my passions I can say that I am an amateur sport, but I practice but not at the level of performance. I really like to ride a bike, play a flute and many others. I would love to travel especially in the mountains because I love to go on hiking trails. I am a family man and I very much want to be united in the family with as few arguments but as many smiles (I'm not saying that there are arguments in me I said as an idea). I can say I like to go out with only my best friends, I like fun and try new things. I'm one of the smartest students in my class and it's very important, in my opinion, how you talk to a person and how you interact with others. I'm a disciplined and calm person, I don't like to get involved in pointless conflicts, especially for a game. In my spare time I like to play football, hang out with friends and spend time in front of the computer. I train at the Football Sports Club "Zimbru Chisinau" I play in the position of defensive midfielder and I love this position. Although I don't practice them at the performance level, I try to keep in shape and have fun through these means. My flaw, I think, is that there are some situations where I get extremely angry very quickly, especially those where I know I'm right, but rejected. Where I live I can say guaranteed that it is an amazingly beautiful city, with charming Moldovans and respectful people. We have a lot of parks, lots of bars and nightclubs in it. I do not practice a high-level gaming, hurtce the game that allows me PC. As a rule, I put my heart into everything I do, if I'm interested and consider any advice I've received, no matter who it's given. I'm currently a student at Al. I. Cuza High School of Technology, and I'm in the 11th grade. I'm not so good at putting myself in value with words, I think it's the facts that matter. I'm not the kind of person who's too upset. I'm optimistic and consider myself a lucky person in every way. I love smart people who have an opinion or something to say, but unfortunately these days you rarely see anything like this. That's who I am!

- "chilles is sad and angry because hector, the trojan leader, killed his best friend patroclus. he seems angry with himself because he didn't or protect patroclus against the trojans."

can you be a bit more specific