I need help with an argumentative essay please

Today I think the most critical issue college students is money. Many students do not have the money to go the the schools they want and end up being in financial debt. Some students can't even go to high school or middle school because of money. For some it is very difficult to find the money that they need to go to school. For those who are able to go to school they end up being in debt just to attend.

Once the are about to graduate they then have another problem on their hands. Which is being in debt, as young adult's going out into the world they then have to find a way to either live with there debt until they can pay it off or find a quick way to resolve it which is very difficult. Once these students graduate it's possible that money is all they worry about for a very long time.

I think that once they are out in the working world to solve this problem they should of course first get a job. Then I believe it is very important to save there money or if they thought of this before graduation save their money then too. This is a very important step because money that you save eventually adds up. Especially after long college years. The next step I think they should take would be to live in a home that will not bring so much financial issues for example they could live with a friend or parent if their financial situation is very difficult for them. Then they should look for a well paying job and save there money to fix the financial debt they have to deal with. This way there debts may be easily paid off at some point and they won't have to have such a financial problem over there heads any longer.

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