Rewrite the sentences to eliminate wordiness and
redundancy: “The balloon quickly rocketed up into the
really cold air. We were scared and frightened because it
was moving really fast. However, it was all good in the
end."

IN EXPLANATION

Explanation:

“The balloon quickly rocketed up into the

really cold air. We were scared and frightened because it

was moving really fast. However, it was all good in the

end."

the reason that neiterkob's daughter most likely tell the beginnings of the maasai is : to explain the readers the origin of maasai culture

with this explanation, the reader will grasp a better concept about it and not lost in the middle of reading.

                                            (hope this )

"rodney quicklt turned away and darted into a crowed of student" i thinks thats it but idk