The proposed ban against videos depicting animal cruelty the choice of parents to read violent fairy tales to children laws preventing young people from buying alcohol and tobacco restrictions in place to prevent children from seeing violent movies

Read the sentence from a student’s essay about “the treasure of lemon brown.” greg sees his father differently after he speaks with lemon brown. what revision should the student make to clarify the main idea of this sentence? replace “sees his father differently” with “appreciates his father.” add the phrase “at the end of the story” after the word “differently.” change the wording of “speaks with” to “has a conversation with.” remove “after he speaks with lemon brown” from the sentence.