I write poems would love for feedback.
Please dont steal them i put hours into them.

When the flowers bloom and when the sun began to rise. I will be here in your arms watching you smile or soothing your cries. How the time has passed and the days have gone by. through the good and the bad, you're still by my side. Oh, what a pair of partners and crime. I feel your skin gently against mine. oh, what a sight. My, oh my aren't you fine. We have our moments where our thoughts and feelings don't align. But even though the storms and the lows. We end up falling and rising high. Sometimes I wish I could do more in our efforts combined. To create something so beautiful that it can't be forgotten or left behind. When you kiss me with those lips. we have yet to say the words of love and declare it to god up above. Maybe with my voice of love, you'll fall in love and see this is not an error. where my dreams become yours and your dreams become mine. where we support one and another and we are one of a kind. let the world see how united we are. We will forever move forward. And stand our ground. Oh yes, we will truly go far.