Which revision is the best example of adding concrete
details?
Schaffer told another person in his office to sound the
wrong alarm and that caused a big miscommunication
during the Chicago fire.
Schaffer told his assistant to strike the wrong alarm box
and that caused a miscommunication during the massive
Chicago fire of 1871
Schaffer mistakenly told his assistant to strike alarm Box
342 instead of the correct box and that caused a
miscommunication during a fire in Chicago.
Schaffer mistakenly told his assistant to strike alarm Box
342, and as a result, firefighters were directed to an
incorrect location during the Chicago fire of 1871.
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Ill give 50 points and brainiest if i can. would be grateful for any on this. the industrial revolution moved the united states into a new economic era. using the resources provided respond to the following prompts as they deal with economic development in the united states. using the maps available on the web links tab, explain the economic development of the united states, especially in regard to its emergence as a major industrial power. (focus on industrial sections; cities and towns; territorial growth; agricultural, mineral, and resource regions; coal fields; slavery; value and production; and distribution of agriculture and manufacturing areas.) using the available maps, explain the economic advantages of the physical geography of the united states. explain the gains that the united states made from trade.

Which statement most strongly develops a positive tone? a. i was happy when i received my first paycheck for my hand work. b. winter break is approaching quickly, and i cannot wait to go shopping for gifts. c. going to the beach is one of my favorite activities; i love surfing and paddle boarding. d. a sense of accomplishment overwhelmed me as i stepped into into the stage that sunny, glorious day of graduation.

Who dies in a duel because of his pride and his anger