Kelsey is an engineering student at Lafayette College in which revision of the underlined sentences creates a
Easton, Pennsylvania. For her senior project, she and her parallel structure within the paragraph?
team are designing a robotic device to help children with
disabilities play a musical instrument. They selected the Because the recorder is familiar, children feel
recorder. The recorder has several advantages over other
veral advantages over other comfortable playing it.
instruments. The recorder is plastic, making it low cost
The recorder is familiar, helping children feel more
and durable. The recorder is small, allowing it to be held
comfortable playing it.
easily. Another advantage is that many people are
familiar with the recorder. So children feel more
People are familiar with the recorder, which creates
comfortable playing it.
comfort for children.
O Musical instruments need to feel comfortable to
children if we expect them to try to play.